Summary draft and thesis

Prosthetic leg (Ottobock)

The webpage “running prostheses” from Ottobock introduces the Ottobock 1E91 Runner prosthetic distinguishes between its functions and features, each serving a unique purpose. 

In terms of functions, the Runner is designed for athletic performance, enabling amputees to participate in both casual jogging and competitive sports, including sprinting and long-distance running. It is built to store energy with each stride and release it efficiently for forward propulsion, optimizing both speed and endurance. Additionally, the prosthetic offers customizability, allowing adjustments tailored to the individual user’s needs based on their body type and running style (Ottobock, n.d.a).

Regarding its features, the Runner incorporates a carbon-fiber spring that provides high flexibility and energy return, boosting propulsion during running. Its lightweight design reduces the energy required for movement, making each stride more efficient. Furthermore, the prosthetic offers five degrees of freedom, enabling multi-axis movement for greater agility and more natural mobility (Ottobock, n.d.b).

While the functions focus on enhancing running performance, the features describe the advanced technologies that make these functions possible, such as the carbon spring and customizable design​.

Thesis statement:

While the Ottobock prosthetic leg requires high maintenance, amputees should purchase it to realise their dream of running while having a high-quality running experience, due to its high performance and customizability. 


References:

1. Ottobock Running Prostheses, Inland Empire Region (n.d.a). https://www.ottobock.com/en-ie/prosthetics/running-prostheses

2. Ottobock Running Prostheses, United States Region (n.d.b). https://www.ottobock.com/en-us/prosthetics/running-prosthetics


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